similes for emotions
Helen. I’ve found lots of new favorites. So often they can be stale and overused.
Thank you! I guess ‘attention span of a hummingbird’ would get the same idea across, but somehow it’s not the same. Thanks, Dina.Done right, similes can communicate so much. Some of theirs that come to mind are; “That hill was steep as a cow’s face and I was coming off it like a turpentined cat” or “I know that woman and she’s mean as cat manure.” Another one is”It was as dark as the inside of a cow.”. Thanks. I think this is my favourite one so far. I do like, ‘like someone else’s shadow’. Since I can’t experience it first-hand, I’d probably read several of those fictional representations (like All Quiet on the Western Front), hopefully in my genre but not necessarily, and take notes on similes these authors use.
I never could come up with those on my own. A busy fall.
Look at these I found on G+: OK, there’s one more rule about similes: Make them concise. They are harder than they sound. I am posting a link to your site in my next newsletter, Tea and Empathy for Writers, and on my Barefoot Writing Academy facebook page. Sort of “um! Your blog brings me to a new place of understanding. (I’m writing about refugees near European Borders), ‘like a weed, lost in an English garden’… Hmmm…, As to the point as a “Uh, um, i can’t remember.what is it called. Please help Electric violin?? For a moment I was stuck for words – Thanks great article, helped me out! I was fascinated by them and kept seeing them everywhere! Cannot load blog information at this time.
That teacher was as dull as dishwater. Ha ha! Eyes sunk into his sockets Hmm… Pretty pointy. Pingback: How to Say “As dumb as…” Without Being Boring | WordDreams... Pingback: Descriptions Writers Need–“As dumb as…” – Today's Author, What a great selection. How to Say “As dumb as…” Without Being Boring | WordDreams... Descriptions Writers Need–“As dumb as…” – Today's Author. I want to write I was at airport, I cried a lot( I was crying because I was leaving her without saying goodbye and I didn't got a chance). Her hair was as white as snow but I’m not sure what to do -He’s like a good book in the library; everyone wants to check him out. You are so kind. You could almost say we’re so used to mild conditions that we become afraid of what others would call “real” weather—weather wimps. Can you help me describe my grandma in a good way. I played clarinet in marching band, which is its own level of awful. As white as snow. How about these:
My youngest brother came up with the opening line, which suits the occasion for both of us now. Similes add such great color to writing–use them often and liberally.
How eloquent!… Great list…. Not to sound trite, but the words jumped off the screen and grabbed me. Pingback: 10 Hits and Misses for 2015 | WordDreams... Pingback: 10 Hits and Misses for 2012 | WordDreams... 5 – His hair soared in the wind like a captive egret, finally released into the wild. ), Then I shall use these as inspiration – again thank you very much , Had to share this one, Jacqui! They are great!. Can u help me with this one. I’m going over to check your blog.
I can’t believe I missed this two weeks ago. What a surprise when I learned it’s not just a clever way to say ‘she’s thin’, but must be related to the theme of the book. Thanks Jacqui. I struggle with making it relevant. I came up with it and I’m only ten. Nothing can beat ‘as tangled as Grandma’s yarn’, ‘as beautiful as a bird dog on point’, ‘like a violin in a marching band’ (I got these from writers I read). You have really peaked my interest on this topic, might you offer me some more sources?
That one makes a lot of sense to me, too. “As flexible as a rubber band”?? I’ll keep trying.
I want the similes of lonely, angry, tired, embarassed for example:when l am happy, l am as beautiful as a flower. Whenever you can’t think of a good metaphor, a simile makes an excellent substitute. — Author Unknown. which of the following is rarely used in business writing?
Did you have any favorites from the similes lists above? It must be too early in the morning…. Oh that’s good. bedroom eyes, dark hair falling into them
LOL! I have a disgusting visual for it! I seriously like this writing a bunch! . Thanks Alot Jacqui I’m finiding this really helpful, hopefully Ill pass my highschool english exam using these. Thanks, Jacqui, for sharing. Under heavy lids; heavy-lidded Kids may wonder what the heck that means. Wrote a few, but am out of ideas. I like that one. That took me a while to absorb! They evoke images far beyond the range of words. My maiden name is also Murray, by the way . Some great ones, there. Create a free website or blog at WordPress.com. There’s a lot that I find refreshingly different; a few of which are: the stretched cable, beaming like a full moon, and curious as a parsnip. Our neighbors keep asking to use our spare trashcan space. There are some good ones. I learn so much from your blog. As one who’s both played in marching band, and who’s played violin, I can attest that such a simile is certainly jarring, to say the least. …Jerry Falwell… I loved this post! Does anyone have a good similie for: beady eyes as red as…. Post was not sent - check your email addresses! . Your points are really well formed and thought up. Thanks! I’ve started collecting the ones I read that I like, hoping they’ll spark my imagination when the need arises. I have like 9 more but I realize I should not tell other people the ones I don’t have a claim yet. Yahoo is part of Verizon Media. Is it alright to use one in my own writing? thank you Jacqui… i very much appreciate. Great ideas and advice for using similes. Amazing you played instruments that fit both! That is something I can remember. Let’s see if anyone has another idea. Writing is a wonderful activity. ..an introvert at a house party? Wonderful post! Enter your email address to receive notifications of new posts by email. Enjoy these (and the occasional metaphor thrown in): Click here for 70 more collections of descriptions (like sounds, emotions, and headaches–my personal favorite). I won’t ask your married name, but I find ‘murray’ much easier than my maiden name. I’ve decided that natural is better, however I am able to reach that state. Simile–the comparison of two unlike things using the word ‘like’ or ‘as’. The importance of using Similes. My pleasure! You are a great asset for writers. Reblogged this on Spirit Sunshine's Blog. I used to make my own instant flavored coffees for Christmas gifts. It’s quite a challenge! I need a cuppa right now. It has to fit in with the plot, character, story (duh). Look for her next prehistoric fiction, In the Footsteps of Giants Winter 2020. Well that’s a great one. That is good to know! they are so useful. Like the new pic. You can find her tech ed books at her publisher’s website, Structured Learning. Can’t wait to check out your other posts on writing! Those evoke images. …as a Louisiana sheriff… It would fit him perfectly. Information about your device and internet connection, including your IP address, Browsing and search activity while using Verizon Media websites and apps. Who would think weeds are interesting–but you make them so, Tim. Top 10 Commented-on Articles and Click-throughs in 2014 | WordDreams... 10 Hits and Misses for 2014 | WordDreams... 10 Hits and Misses for 2014 « Jacqui Murray.
Her face is heart shape I need a simile or a metaphor for that I agree – they’re wonderful if they work, teeth clenching if they’re too far-fetched. “it rained like… “. How can write someone being to shy to look at me? So many ways to say the same thing, aren’t there. I can think of a few–‘She’s as good as a Mobius Strip in the hands of a child’, ‘She’s as good as sticking your tongue in a fan’, She’s as good as the Sahara on a rainy Tuesday’. If you do not consent to the above, please don’t leave a comment. Thank you for liking my post “The Energizer Bunny”. …as an octopus… i hate how the language is here, rude horrible and mean. Thank you! To enable Verizon Media and our partners to process your personal data select 'I agree', or select 'Manage settings' for more information and to manage your choices. Thanks Carol for stopping by. Dark solemn eyes Way to avoid those cliches. Or this one ‘kept his anger hidden, like a gun’. “He could sell a ketchup Popsicle to a woman in white gloves” lolll. long eyelashes I definitely look forward to writing with similes. She is also the author/editor of over a hundred books on integrating tech into education, adjunct professor of technology in education, an Amazon Vine Voice, a columnist for NEA Today, and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics.
Do you have any favorites? I started reading when my older brother began first grade (no kindergarten back then) and I would do homework with him. Pingback: How to say ”as dumb as”….. without being boring – Alasklintin blog. definitely, even though I think my favorites change every day but right now I have two; ‘like exchanging stares with a statue’, and ‘Like having someone else’s shadow’…. Well I AM honest, straight-forward—nice to hear. Straight-forward, honest. My bff wants to be a master in this field. Ferret-like eyes I enjoy your writing about writing.td. They are! As blind as a bat. I will bookmark this blog. Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy, the Rowe-Delamagente thrillers, and the Man vs. I’m getting ready to update this list. I have a English assessment on Monday and I need your help. It was that one thing that is sharp and um pointy. Love your site, will follow you on a regular basis now. ( Log Out / What would be a good simile to use for describing a person being drawn in. It could, in context. Is hair color indicative of her life experience? Thank you so much? Pingback: 51 Great Similes to Spark Imagination | Bologna2bethlehem's Blog.
& left commentary so astry mystery quickly beckoned dimly. I thought of them in my English Literature class last week . I wish I’d come up with them. I’m glad music is being honoured ! I was in airport I cried like ....???? So simply put together.
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